小作文这种文体虽然我们以前没有接触过，但是事实证明小作文是帮助我们写作拿高分的垫脚石。拿到一个高的小作文的分数，很可能会帮助大部分学生突破写作6分的“桎梏”，甚至拿到更理想的分数。但是越是分数高，细节方面要求就越严格，看一下我们写小作文时可以避免的一些问题。

1. The families who owned cars increased dramatically from 10％in 1950 to 50％ in 2000.

拥有车的家庭由1950的10％急剧上升至2000年的50％.

解析：在线图中趋势（包括increase，rise，decrease等等）作动词时，其主语是数据，本句中family是不能执行increase这个动词的。

修改后：The number of the families who owned cars increased dramatically from 10％ in 1950 to 50％ in 2000.

2. 对题目数据的理解错误

例：

题目：The pie chart illustrates disparity in the proportion of total of time using on different types of website between males and females.

学生习作：Males spend more time than females in the website of entertainment, shopping and sports. Specifically, the more distinguished difference is in  the percentage of time using sports and shopping, where males comprised 20% and 19% respectively ,and females accounted for respective 9% and 10%.

解析：本句题目讲得是“花在不同网站的时间的百分比”，但是学生说“where males comprised 20% and 19% respectively ,and females accounted for respective 9% and 10%”即“男生在 sports 和shopping网站上各自占据20% and 19%”，明显和题目中的是时间占的百分比是冲突的。

修改后：Males spend more time than females in the website of entertainment, shopping and sports. Specifically, the more distinguished difference is in the percentage of time using sports and shopping, where the percentage comprised 20% and 19% respectively  in males,and respective 9% and 10% in females.

希望大家能注意这些小的细节，为我们小作文冲高分，甚至为我们写作总分拿到高分筑下一道坚强的堡垒。