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2015年10月10日雅思考试写作范文

2015-10-21

来源:环球教育整理

小编:Sophie 199
摘要:根据各位考生的回忆2015年10月10日雅思考试写作饼图主要是关于用水的变化比较,环球教育在这里为大家提供了优秀的范文,希望能为大家提供帮助!

   以下便是小编为大家带来的2015年10月10日雅思考试写作真题及范文了,大家快来看看吧!

  Task 1

  图表类型:饼图

  作文题目:根据考生回忆,今天的饼图是关于悉尼1997年和2007年各行业用水的变化,这些行业分别是food, building, manufacturing, household ,service。实际上这种类型的题目在今年的8月13号和8月29号两场雅思考试中都有考到,考生们一定要凸显出数据的变化,同时要注意不同行业用水之间的对比排序。

  Task 2

  分析:

  题目的类型属于单一观点的讨论。话题类型属于政府投资类。这道题题干中提出了影响疾病的两个方面:环境和住房。这两个方面在正文中都要提到是如何影响人们健康的。

  范文主体思路分析:

  主体段一:环境问题和住房条件确实会影响人们健康,需要政府关注和投资

  主体段二:政府充当的只是组织协调者,人们自己也需要对自己的健康负责,养成良好的生活方式

  word count:277

  There is no doubt that people’s health will be influenced directly or indirectly by the environment and housing condition. Whether governments should focus more on the environment and estate has triggered a controversy. I feel that individuals should take more responsibility for their well-being other than governments’ increasing attention.

  Indeed, the environmental problems and housing conditions are two main sources for illness and diseases. In many large cities in northern China, haze weather has become a daily killer, especially causing respiratory diseases in winter. Also, populace will easily access to viruses and bacteria if they live in a poor housing condition without any advanced sanitation. Therefore, governments should give more attention and higher investment in these two areas.

  Compared to individuals, governments have more power to arrange a wide range of social resources to address severe issues; however, it does not mean that addressing this problem totally depends on governments. The state is an organizer or a coordinator in our society instead of a responsibility taker. Although governments can claim people to enhance the awareness of environment protection, make policy to strengthen the environment management and invest estate where they need, public health condition is still a personal problem to some degree. People have the obligation to form and keep a healthy and positive lifestyle, or they will still face the threat of illness and diseases even the environment and housing condition getting better.

  In conclusion, people also need to take responsibility of their well-being as governments only hold a position as organizer and coordinator. The most feasible solution may be that governments provide a fine setting on one hand and public should pursue a healthy lifestyle for themselves on the other hand.

  以上内容仅供参考。小编在这里预祝大家取得一个好成绩!


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