如果开头并没有做到它应起的作用，它便足以对这次托福考试的分数造成影响。下面是环球教育（原环球教育）为大家总结的托福写作开头大忌和修改方案。

　　1、废话连篇急煞读者

　　失败案例：

　　Topic --Should collegestudents be allowed to get married?

　　This topic is veryinteresting. I am very interested in talking about this topic. Because I amalso a college student and I am not married……

　　修改方案：开门见山 直奔主题

　　In my opinion, it would notbe a wise decision to allow college students to get married。

　　2、观点不明态度暧昧

　　失败案例：

　　Topic--Should collegestudents be allowed to get married?

　　I think this topic is veryhard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so thistopic is very difficult for me……

　　3、渐行渐远 离题千里

　　失败案例：

　　Topic---It is said thatnowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential tosuccess through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagreewith the statement?

　　I think to success, we musthave a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we mustlearn a lot of things, for example, English, music, and etc. We can learn thesequalities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we canlearn from many places。

　　4、中式英语人见人跪

　　失败案例：

　　Topic 1-The happiest momentin your life

　　In our life, there arealways some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

　　Topic 2- The populationproblem

　　The population problem is avery big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can alwayssee people mountain people sea there。

　　Topic3- Is there fairnessin today’s business world?

　　I think in today’s society,there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chop when Igo out buy things……

　　Topic 4- The advantage ofbeing a nice person

　　Being a nice person havemany advantage. I believe if a person always does bad things, he will get“baoying”。