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　　小作文考题总结与趋势预测

　　1.后期复习重点：柱状图bar chart, 表格图table

　　2.混合图--- 可以参考我们今天要分享的C8T1

　　3.周四容易出现不太常规的图表作文。

　　4.八月考试的同学要密切留意非数据图。（每年八月必考）

　　5.地图题“异军突起”，2016年考到4场，但2017年已经考了9场。

　　6.前后对比类和选址类（8.3 考题and 6.17考题）都要引起重视。前后对比可参考C9 T1；选址可参考C5 T3（P75）

　　7.流程图，注意连接词，动词，被动。

　　小作文写作要点

　　关键词：细心审题

　　注意事项：时态

　　真题：C8 P30 组合图的考察

　　饼图显示了全世界范围内农业用地产量下降的主要原因。

　　表格介绍了这些原因在20世纪90年代是如何影响北美、欧洲和大洋洲的。

　　通常是一个图一个段落，重点描述图中的主要信息。结尾段给出两幅图之间的关系，如果没有关系则分别简要概括两幅图最主要的特征即可。

　　例文：考官范文  C8 P162

　　第一段：

　　The pie chart shows that there are four main causes of farmland becoming degraded in the world today. Globally, 65% of degradation is caused by too much animal grazing and tree clearance，constituting 35% and 30% respectively. A further 28% ofglobal degradation is due to over-cultivation of crops. Other causesaccount for only 7% collectively.

　　讲解：

　　注意词汇的改写，尽量在第一段的时候进行同义词的替换，拿到词汇多样性的分数。

　　PS：数据图中的“占据”可用“make up” “take up”“constitute” “represent” “account for”，一定不要用“occupy”（这个单词只能表示时间和空间的占有）

　　第二段：

　　These causes affected differentregions differently in the 1990s, with Europe 独立主格 having as much as 9.8% of degradation due todeforestation, while the impact of this on Oceania and North America wasminimal, with only 1.7% and 0.2% of land affected respectively 首先交代第一列. Europe, with the highest overall percentage of landdegraded (23%), also suffered from over-cultivation (7.7%) and over - grazing(5.5%) 第二行. In contrast, Oceania had 13% ofdegraded farmland and this was mainly due to over- grazing (11.3%) 第三行. North America had a lower proportion of degraded landat only 5%, and the main causes of this were over-cultivation (3.3%) and, to alesser extent, over-grazing (1.5%)第一行.

　　讲解：

　　表格图一定要按照一定的顺序，考官在这些数据中欧洲的数据是最明显的，因此他围绕着欧洲的数据进行描述。

　　PS：括号也是带数据的方法。

　　最后一段：

　　Overall, itis clear that Europe suffered more from farmland degradation thanthe other regions, and the main causes there were deforestation andover-cultivation.

　　讲解：

　　经典句型：it is clear that = it isobvious that =it is apparent that

　　大作文考题总结和趋势预测

　　大作文主要分为议论文、报告文和混合文。

　　按照考察比例而言，建议大家复习主要以议论文为主。

　　参考2017年下半年近期考题：

　　7.8---教育类  7.15---教育类  7.20---社会类   7.29---社会类    8.3---教育类

　　今天我们的范文分析就是教育类！（历年来的考试重点，也是大家最擅长的话题）

　　PS：除了常考点“教育类”和“社会类”，希望大家也留意一下还未考到的话题，比如全球化类、文化类、媒体类、环境类。

　　例文：C8T1 考官范文解析

　　选择原因：

　　1.教育类话题

　　2.结构易于模仿

　　3.单词简单（希望大家跳出长难单词的误区）

　　题目及翻译：

　　Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give yourown opinion.

　　一些人认为家长应该教导学生如何成为好的社会成员；而其他的人则认为学校才是孩子学习如何成为社会好成员的地方。讨论双方观点并给出你自己的看法。

　　审题及思路：

　　Mind map

　　审题：有哪些观点？

　　作对社会有用的人，不要用useful people

　　用考官认可的词组：to be good members of society

　　Parenting VS. Schooling

　　Discussion 类题目的特点：比argumentation 要容易审题，题目中包含了2个针锋相对的观点。要对2个观点分别分析和论证。

　　最关键的，不要忘记陈述自己的观点，一般出现在文章第一段。

　　本文结构：

　　第一段：引出话题，并提出观点。

　　第二段：观点1+论证，即家长在孩子的教育中扮演的重要角色。

　　第三段：观点2+论证，即学校在孩子教育中起到了很重要的作用。

　　结尾段：总结观点并升华主题，指出孩子的教育不仅靠家长和学校而且还需要社会各界的共同努力。

　　C8P163考官范文作为结构模板：

　　C8 P163考官范文的第一段：

　　Achild’s education has never been about learning information and basic skillsonly. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, thiscannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.

　　逐句解析：

　　第一句：“孩子的教育不仅仅是学习知识和基本技能。”这句话可以用到任何教育类的背景表述。

　　第二句：“教育包含要交给下一代如何成为社会好成员”

　　next generation经常作为children，teenagers , young adults的替换词

　　最后一句话：不仅仅是家长的职责。（点题）

　　大作文的第一段：背景+话题+观点

　　结构延伸：

　　如何用考官的第一段的结构写犯罪类真题作文？

　　2015.8.8考察过的真题

　　Some people who havebeen in prison become good citizens later, some people think that they are thebest people to talk to school students the danger of committing a crime. Do youagree or disagree?

　　罪犯在监狱服刑后会洗心革面，有人认为他们是教育孩子犯罪的危险性的最佳人选。你同意还是不同意？

　　可用考官范文原句套用和替换为：

　　A child’s education has never been about learning

　　information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to become law-abiding citizens.

　　Some people claim that(可以替换believe that / think that ) those exprisoners are the best teachers to raise the awar-eness of crimesand laws, but

　　I believe that other measures are equally effective.（观点句）

　　C8 P163考官范文的第二段（正文段）：

　　In order to be a good member of anysociety the individual must respect and obey the rules of theircommunity and share their values. Educating children to understand the need to obey rules and respect others always begins in the home and iswidely thought to be the responsibility of parents. They will certainly bethe first to help children learn what is important in life, how they are expected to behave and what role they will play in their world.

　　逐句解析：

　　第一句：重点单词的运用和替换

　　第二句：开头用v-ing是语法多样性的点

　　第三句：要学会使用对仗和排比的句型

　　思考点：

　　家长和孩子的关系

　　家长VS.孩子

　　论据一：

　　The intimacybetween parents and children is a guarantee of trust which is a preconditionfor them to teach about how to become a good member of the society.

　　父母与孩子之间的亲密关系是他们教如何成为社会的好成员前提。

　　论据二：

　　Children areaccompanied by their parents during the most of their childhood, and willnaturally take their mothers and fathers as heroes and heroines; if parents canset up an upright model for them, they will easily follow it and form lovablehabits.

　　孩子们在童年的大部分时间都由父母陪伴，自然会把他们的父母当作英雄；如果父母能为他们树立一个正直的榜样，他们就会很容易地追随它，形成可爱的习惯。

　　论据三：

　　Parents canpatiently teach children how to be a good person by using their own examplesand telling fascinating stories.

　　父母可以耐心地用自己的例子或者讲一些引人入胜的故事教孩子如何做一个好人。

　　论据延伸：

　　20170715真题

　　Some parents need to spend time on reading or telling stories tochildren, while others think children can read through a variety of sources,such as book, TV and internet by themselves. Discuss both these views and giveyour own opinion.

　　父母应该给儿童讲故事还是让他们自己从书上，电视上和网上看？

　　Caring for children is an important thingof the society. It is suggested all mothers and fathers be required to takechildcare training courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree with thisopinion?

　　所有父母都应该学习育儿课程吗？

　　C8 P163考官范文的第三段（正文段）：

　　However, learning to understand and share the value system of awhole society cannot be achieved just in the home. Once a child goes to school, they are entering a wider community where teachers and peers will have just as much influence as their parents doat home. At school, children will experience working and living with people from a whole variety of backgrounds from the wider society. This experience should teach them how to co-operate with each other and how to contribute tothe life of their community.

　　逐句解析：

　　第一句：是引入话题

　　第二句：进入社会= entering a wider community

　　第三句：学校的特征

　　谈到School就要提到人和物

　The school is a community where children interact with each other and practice being members of groups by learning to cooperate, compete, love, help andtrust.

　　学校是孩子们通过学习合作、竞争、爱、帮助和信任并互相交流和实践的地方。?

　　Schools have the advantage of having the educational authorities to back them up. Therefore they can offer to children systematic learning materials, qualified teaching staff, and various activities, while parents are incapable of doing so and can even convey biased opinions.

　　学校有教育部门支持他们的优势。因此，他们可以给孩子们提供系统教材、高质量的教师团队和丰富的活动，而父母做不到，甚至还可能传达一些偏见。

　　思路共享：

　　Some people think students should go to boarding schools instead of living at home.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

　　学生应改出国留学还是留在家乡呢？

　　考官范文的总结段：

　　But to be avaluable member of any community is not like learning a simple skill. It is something that an individual goes on learningthroughout life and is the responsibility of every member of a society to takeresponsibility for helping the younger generation to become active and able membersof that society.

　　解析：

　　重要句型：

　　It is the responsibility of sb to do sth.

　　做某事是某人的责任。

　　替换词：

　　an individual = people

　　activeand able = good

　　effective = efficient

　　available = accessable

　　comfortable= comforting = cosy