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小编:Eileen 53说起雅思作文,很多烤鸭都觉得“我的中段写的还不错怎么就又低分了呢?”那是因为好的开始是成功的一半啊!
如果你们的开头总是千篇一律的“With the development of ……”那么估计考官对你们也很难爱起来。随着近年烤鸭大军的不断壮大,也就意味着考官们的工作时间在不断被压缩。所以如果千篇一律使用模板,那么很可能让考官在一开始对你的印象分就大打折扣,这样一来想要得到高分也不是那么容易啦!
雅思作文开头究竟怎么写?就让环球小编来告诉你!
1.释义核心名词
对核心名词进行解释,这种方法既能显得你非常专业,又能突出自己的观点,非常值得一学哦~
我们以剑8 Test1为大家做例子:
Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
考官范文这么说:
A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.
It has always included就是对child’s education的一个最好释义,这种句型和方法可以套用在很多话题中,但需要烤鸭们提前对话题进行一个思考才行。
2.表明立场承上启下
开头部分最重要的一个作用之一就是承上启下,所以最好是能够在第一段就明确表明自己的观点,但是不要一上来就“我支持XXX观点”,还是需要由一个类似于讨论句的句子进行总结,然后引出自己的观点。
我们以2015年10月31日的雅思真题来为大家进行一次解释:
题目:
Some people think people working in creative arts should be financially supported by government. Others think they should find financial support from other resources. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
这道题说有的人觉得艺术职业应该由国家来拨款,另一部分人说搞艺术应该自己设法获得经济上的支持,并要求你讨论这两种观点。
我们来看范文的开头:
The realization of basic human needs such as enough clothing and food makes it necessary for a more advanced spiritual enjoyment from art. For those who devote themselves to creating aesthetic works and pleasure, I think they should be supported by both government and other resources.
这段开头的最后一个I think直接就引出了作者的观点,而前一句则是铺垫陈述,因为衣食是基本需求,而艺术则让人获得更多的精神愉悦,【所以】,【我认为……】这种引出方式会更加自然,考生们不妨学习一下。
另一个版本是:
Visual and auditory arts play a key role in education and entertainment, making these fields integral aspects of our society among all ages. Nevertheless, there is a controversial division about whether these areas ought to receive, or if they are even deserving of, any public funds.
我们看到这个版本,就是针对art这个话题进行了一次讨论。先说了艺术在教育和娱乐领域扮演了非常重要的角色,但是一直以来,艺术是否值得拥有public funds(也就是题目中的should be financially supported by government)还是一个比较有争议的话题。
这一段相较于上一段用词更加复杂,但是我们看见的是通过了对话题的讨论来方便其最后引出自己的观点。因为是否能够拥有public funds是很有争议的,所以在下文中,作者就要来表达自己的观点了,这也是一种十分不错的引出方式呢~
这两种开头方式同学们都学会了吗?下次的雅思作文要尝试哦~